Welcome to my third elevator pitch!
Will it be that the third time is the charm? Stay tuned to find out!
First, let's take a look at the feedback from last time...
"I really love your enthusiasm!"
"I was actually smiling throughout your pitch."
"Your delivery was excellent except for when you would look down at what I'm assuming was a script or notes."
Hmmm. So, I obviously have the enthusiasm and dynamic part of the pitch down! So, let's try it off-script now....
So, based on my feedback, I tried not to use a script this time! Free-style, baby! And, I tried to keep my enthusiasm still kicking.
Enjoy, everyone xoxo
Hi Mazal. I like how humorous but vibrant on how your pitch came off. I really wish I sounded as excited for my product but I was feeling so under the weather. As for your product, I think I would buy it, considering the fact that I use bed sheets and I wash them on a weekly basis. Anywho, great pitch! You have charisma. Here is my post http://clarissaidos.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Mazal! I really like how funny and personable you seem! You really seem approachable, and your idea seems like an interesting thing to try out! I think maybe next time (which we don't have in class) you should try to have someone else take the video so it is easier to see and understand! Overall, great job! Check out my post if you would like:http://ament3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
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ReplyDeleteWhat a catchy hook to get me intrigued into your pitch! Your pitch was very good and I liked how natural you were presenting your idea. Some food for thought would be to focus on bringing up the product and its features/benefits sooner in the pitch. Spending more time on what the product is will create more questions and potentially more interest for customers/investors to seek it out. Secondly, try placing your camera/phone on a stand of some sort. I lost a little quality of your pitch due to the camera shaking. Overall you had a great pitch and I really enjoyed your enthusiasm. If you’d like to check out my blog, it is http://entreprenue-whaaat.blogspot.com/ .
You're a very enthusiastic and personable speaker. I think you're enthusiasm and passion for your product really is what can bring it to success. Definitely continue to be as enthusiastic and passionate throughout the entire process as you are in your speech and that can bring about good success.
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