Wow, is it time for a new elevator pitch already?
Before I lead into my new pitch, I'd like to look back at my last pitch to show what aspects I wanted to change based on my feedback (and personal opinion).
1) "Talking to the camera." I didn't realize how much I was looking at the camera, but I have to remember that in a real pitch I'll be looking at a real investor. I tried to make it seem more 'realistic' this time, as if I was looking at a possible investor and maybe a person or two next to him/her.
2) Length. Short and sweet this time!
All of the feedback was pretty much understandable, and I feel like I was able to improve in both aspects in my newest pitch. So, my new pitch, as you will see in a moment, is shorter than my last one and less focused on the camera. I wanted to keep my optimism and professional look, so I kept those aspects.
This is a very original idea! Fitted sheets are a battle that I haven't really given much thought to and just put up with the hassle of trying to cram my mattress into the corners of the sheet (and keep it there). I really love your enthusiasm and appreciate that you took previous comments into consideration. Great job! Here's the link to my post as well. http://rachelcmead.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting concept and I was actually smiling throughout your pitch. This a very small problem we don't always think about because it's one we just kind of deal with. However, this product could potentially be lined up to be included in every bed set in the future.
ReplyDeleteHeres the link to my post:
http://anicentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/02/trying-to-give-away-free-money.html
Hey Mazal! I think you're idea is great because putting the fitted sheets back on the bed is the worst part of washing your sheets. Your delivery was excellent except for when you would look down at what I'm assuming was a script or notes. I think looking down in any form is sort of detrimental because it looks like you've gotten nervous or lost confidence in a way. Other than that I thought this was excellent and think this idea could be really successful.
ReplyDeleteCheck out my elevator pitch at: http://sowersent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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